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{"tools/virsh_dev_env/README.md":[{"author":{"_account_id":23883,"name":"Joanna Taryma","email":"joanna.taryma@intel.com","username":"jtaryma"},"change_message_id":"44be177061a2f3318e3afdbd6ed48593b532cf53","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":27,"context_line":"virsh start baremetal"},{"line_number":28,"context_line":"virsh console baremetal"},{"line_number":29,"context_line":""},{"line_number":30,"context_line":"When you login into baremetal, the interface for the provisioning"},{"line_number":31,"context_line":"network will be down. You may need to add an IP manually:"},{"line_number":32,"context_line":""},{"line_number":33,"context_line":"ip addr add \u003c\u003cprovisioning_ip_address\u003e\u003e/\u003c\u003cmask\u003e\u003e dev \u003c\u003cinterface\u003e\u003e"}],"source_content_type":"text/x-gfm","patch_set":1,"id":"9a629dbe_ce608c38","line":30,"updated":"2016-11-08 22:00:13.000000000","message":"I think passive form would look better here (as in the whole paragraph). \ns/When you login into baremetal/After baremetal login/\ns/You may need to add an IP manually/These commands will add IP address/","commit_id":"a3f09bf30c54d119a575c24318c26198d64bdae3"},{"author":{"_account_id":5805,"name":"Chris Krelle","email":"nobodycam@gmail.com","username":"nobodycam"},"change_message_id":"118ca0d94fa61fa68945866b25f980384c561f7c","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":27,"context_line":"virsh start baremetal"},{"line_number":28,"context_line":"virsh console baremetal"},{"line_number":29,"context_line":""},{"line_number":30,"context_line":"When you login into baremetal, the interface for the provisioning"},{"line_number":31,"context_line":"network will be down. You may need to add an IP manually:"},{"line_number":32,"context_line":""},{"line_number":33,"context_line":"ip addr add \u003c\u003cprovisioning_ip_address\u003e\u003e/\u003c\u003cmask\u003e\u003e dev \u003c\u003cinterface\u003e\u003e"}],"source_content_type":"text/x-gfm","patch_set":1,"id":"9a629dbe_43a12545","line":30,"in_reply_to":"9a629dbe_4827b0c9","updated":"2016-11-11 19:40:57.000000000","message":"I agree with Julia here.","commit_id":"a3f09bf30c54d119a575c24318c26198d64bdae3"},{"author":{"_account_id":11655,"name":"Julia Kreger","email":"juliaashleykreger@gmail.com","username":"jkreger","status":"Flying to the moon with a Jetpack!"},"change_message_id":"02f00a9d383aa06128150ac34a6806052910c7d6","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":27,"context_line":"virsh start baremetal"},{"line_number":28,"context_line":"virsh console baremetal"},{"line_number":29,"context_line":""},{"line_number":30,"context_line":"When you login into baremetal, the interface for the provisioning"},{"line_number":31,"context_line":"network will be down. You may need to add an IP manually:"},{"line_number":32,"context_line":""},{"line_number":33,"context_line":"ip addr add \u003c\u003cprovisioning_ip_address\u003e\u003e/\u003c\u003cmask\u003e\u003e dev \u003c\u003cinterface\u003e\u003e"}],"source_content_type":"text/x-gfm","patch_set":1,"id":"9a629dbe_4827b0c9","line":30,"in_reply_to":"9a629dbe_ce608c38","updated":"2016-11-10 17:52:11.000000000","message":"I think this is fine as-is.  I kind of would would prefer to avoid the passive voice in a short instructional how-to.","commit_id":"a3f09bf30c54d119a575c24318c26198d64bdae3"}]}