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{"doc/source/deploy/install-guide.rst":[{"author":{"_account_id":2889,"name":"Aeva Black","email":"aeva.online@gmail.com","username":"tenbrae"},"change_message_id":"e393aa2079343e11bd4a6d110fcbdf5da18321c8","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":2198,"context_line":"Starting with the Kilo release, the Bare Metal service supports exposing"},{"line_number":2199,"context_line":"a configuration drive image to the instances."},{"line_number":2200,"context_line":""},{"line_number":2201,"context_line":"Configuration drive can store metadata and attaches to the instance when it"},{"line_number":2202,"context_line":"boots. One use case for using the configuration drive is to expose a"},{"line_number":2203,"context_line":"networking configuration when you do not use DHCP to assign IP addresses to"},{"line_number":2204,"context_line":"instances."}],"source_content_type":"text/x-rst","patch_set":1,"id":"9abb7d3a_9ce91be9","line":2201,"updated":"2016-06-01 03:11:06.000000000","message":"The grammar parses oddly to me; you\u0027ve mixed passive (\"can store\") and active (\"attaches\") voice in one sentence.\n\nI would like to suggest something like the following, putting both verbs into the passive tense, using the same supporting verb (\"is\"). I\u0027ve also added a clarification about the maximum size of the config drive.\n\n  The configuration drive is used to store instapce-specific metadata, and is attached\n  to the instance the first time it boots. The configuration drive has a maximum size\n  of 64MB.","commit_id":"07ebb5a20f94217b17a5a6dea74524ae2c0f8bc3"},{"author":{"_account_id":2889,"name":"Aeva Black","email":"aeva.online@gmail.com","username":"tenbrae"},"change_message_id":"e393aa2079343e11bd4a6d110fcbdf5da18321c8","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":2211,"context_line":"When used with Compute service"},{"line_number":2212,"context_line":"------------------------------"},{"line_number":2213,"context_line":""},{"line_number":2214,"context_line":"To enable the configuration drive and passes user customized script when deploying an"},{"line_number":2215,"context_line":"instance, pass ``--config-drive true`` parameter and ``--user-data`` to the"},{"line_number":2216,"context_line":"``nova boot`` command, for example::"},{"line_number":2217,"context_line":""}],"source_content_type":"text/x-rst","patch_set":1,"id":"9abb7d3a_7ce6f715","line":2214,"updated":"2016-06-01 03:11:06.000000000","message":"I think it will read better to keep the information about enabling config drives\nseparate from the information about passing in a user script (which should be understood\nby most Nova users). For example:\n\n  To enable the configuration drive for a specific request, pass ``--config-drive true``\n  to the ``nova boot`` command. \n\n  It\u0027s also possible to enable the configuration drive automatically ...\n  (continued)\n\n  In some cases, you may wish to pass a user customized script when deploying\n  and instance. To do this, pass ``--user-data /path/to/file`` to the ``nova boot`` command. More information can be found at [insert link here].","commit_id":"07ebb5a20f94217b17a5a6dea74524ae2c0f8bc3"}]}