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I would suggest something more like \"there are three areas to consider when selecting storage hardware\" or similar.","commit_id":"d6a0f5a0f870ea0c3e9467c97eeeefc54f07144a"},{"author":{"_account_id":9162,"name":"Lana Brindley","email":"openstack@lanabrindley.com","username":"loquacity"},"change_message_id":"4ffa5db76bc7eaa0c6ed5fe7892e065948984225","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":23,"context_line":"        \u003c/listitem\u003e"},{"line_number":24,"context_line":"    \u003c/itemizedlist\u003e"},{"line_number":25,"context_line":"    \u003cpara\u003eSelecting hardware for storage-focused OpenStack"},{"line_number":26,"context_line":"        clouds must reflect that the workloads are storage"},{"line_number":27,"context_line":"        intensive. These workloads are not compute intensive, nor are"},{"line_number":28,"context_line":"        they consistently network intensive. The network may be"},{"line_number":29,"context_line":"        heavily utilized to transfer storage, but they are not"}],"source_content_type":"application/xml","patch_set":2,"id":"9a80dd14_1aae73e6","line":26,"updated":"2015-03-08 22:20:41.000000000","message":"I would remove the \"selecting hardware\" bit here, because we\u0027ve got actor issues again (it sounds like the hardware is selecting itself). What about \"Storage-focused OpenStack clouds must ...\"","commit_id":"d6a0f5a0f870ea0c3e9467c97eeeefc54f07144a"},{"author":{"_account_id":9162,"name":"Lana Brindley","email":"openstack@lanabrindley.com","username":"loquacity"},"change_message_id":"4ffa5db76bc7eaa0c6ed5fe7892e065948984225","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":39,"context_line":"        \u003clistitem\u003e"},{"line_number":40,"context_line":"            \u003cpara\u003eThe overall cost of the solution plays a"},{"line_number":41,"context_line":"                major role in the storage architecture and the"},{"line_number":42,"context_line":"                resulting storage hardware that is selected.\u003c/para\u003e"},{"line_number":43,"context_line":"        \u003c/listitem\u003e"},{"line_number":44,"context_line":"      \u003c/varlistentry\u003e"},{"line_number":45,"context_line":"      \u003cvarlistentry\u003e"}],"source_content_type":"application/xml","patch_set":2,"id":"9a80dd14_5ab46b34","line":42,"updated":"2015-03-08 22:20:41.000000000","message":"This sentence is weird, and could be read two ways (cost changes what you choose, or what you choose changes cost). I would say something like \"The cost of components can change which storage architecture and hardware you choose\" or similar.","commit_id":"d6a0f5a0f870ea0c3e9467c97eeeefc54f07144a"},{"author":{"_account_id":9162,"name":"Lana Brindley","email":"openstack@lanabrindley.com","username":"loquacity"},"change_message_id":"4ffa5db76bc7eaa0c6ed5fe7892e065948984225","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":47,"context_line":"        \u003clistitem\u003e"},{"line_number":48,"context_line":"            \u003cpara\u003eThe performance of the solution,"},{"line_number":49,"context_line":"                measured by observing the latency of storage I-O"},{"line_number":50,"context_line":"                requests, plays a major role.\u003c/para\u003e"},{"line_number":51,"context_line":"        \u003c/listitem\u003e"},{"line_number":52,"context_line":"      \u003c/varlistentry\u003e"},{"line_number":53,"context_line":"      \u003cvarlistentry\u003e"}],"source_content_type":"application/xml","patch_set":2,"id":"9a80dd14_ba7ac774","line":50,"updated":"2015-03-08 22:20:41.000000000","message":"\u0027I-O\u0027 should be expressed as \u0027I/O\u0027 (IBM). \n\nWhat does \u0027plays a major role\u0027 mean here? 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Storage solutions that perform well in"},{"line_number":59,"context_line":"                small configurations but have degraded performance"},{"line_number":60,"context_line":"                would be considered not scalable."},{"line_number":61,"context_line":"                However, a solution that continues to perform well"},{"line_number":62,"context_line":"                at maximum expansion would be considered scalable. The"},{"line_number":63,"context_line":"                ability of the storage solution to continue to perform"}],"source_content_type":"application/xml","patch_set":2,"id":"9a80dd14_da7f7b64","line":60,"updated":"2015-03-08 22:20:41.000000000","message":"Move the negation earlier in the sentence: \"... would not be considered scalable.\"","commit_id":"d6a0f5a0f870ea0c3e9467c97eeeefc54f07144a"},{"author":{"_account_id":9162,"name":"Lana Brindley","email":"openstack@lanabrindley.com","username":"loquacity"},"change_message_id":"4ffa5db76bc7eaa0c6ed5fe7892e065948984225","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":434,"context_line":"        \u003cterm\u003eSupportability\u003c/term\u003e"},{"line_number":435,"context_line":"        \u003clistitem\u003e"},{"line_number":436,"context_line":"            \u003cpara\u003eStaff is required to have appropriate training to"},{"line_number":437,"context_line":"                correspond with the chosen hypervisor. 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