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I appreciate all the help you given during the review.","commit_id":"15426155e2ff42db41f72d774db2c75b250b9f6a"},{"author":{"_account_id":10497,"name":"KATO Tomoyuki","email":"kato.tomoyuki@jp.fujitsu.com","username":"to222"},"change_message_id":"e537d80328fd7708eb08db5de787faa0d431dafb","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":38,"context_line":"                      api_class\u003dcinder.keymgr.barbican.BarbicanKeyManager\u003c/para\u003e"},{"line_number":39,"context_line":"                  \u003cnote\u003e"},{"line_number":40,"context_line":"                       \u003cpara\u003eNote: Use a \u0027#\u0027 prefix to comment out the line in this"},{"line_number":41,"context_line":"                             section that begins with \u0027fixed_key\u0027\u003c/para\u003e"},{"line_number":42,"context_line":"                  \u003c/note\u003e"},{"line_number":43,"context_line":"                  \u003c/step\u003e"},{"line_number":44,"context_line":"            \u003c/substeps\u003e"}],"source_content_type":"application/xml","patch_set":10,"id":"da20952f_d09a9061","line":41,"in_reply_to":"da20952f_4d14be4b","updated":"2015-09-01 11:10:45.000000000","message":"No need \"Note:\" here. \u003cnote\u003e generates \"Note\" indication.\n\nhttp://docs-draft.openstack.org/13/207613/10/check/gate-openstack-manuals-tox-doc-publish-checkbuild/f7b250c//publish-docs/draft/config-reference/content/section_initial-configuration.html\n\nFor consistency, cloud you add \".\" in the end of phrase? we usually end with period, also in the note descripiton.","commit_id":"15426155e2ff42db41f72d774db2c75b250b9f6a"},{"author":{"_account_id":6804,"name":"bruce-benjamin","email":"bruce.benjamin@jhuapl.edu","username":"bruce-benjamin"},"change_message_id":"f407418ba17a3d829105badaf8f9e3e52b471bb9","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":38,"context_line":"                      api_class\u003dcinder.keymgr.barbican.BarbicanKeyManager\u003c/para\u003e"},{"line_number":39,"context_line":"                  \u003cnote\u003e"},{"line_number":40,"context_line":"                       \u003cpara\u003eNote: Use a \u0027#\u0027 prefix to comment out the line in this"},{"line_number":41,"context_line":"                             section that begins with \u0027fixed_key\u0027\u003c/para\u003e"},{"line_number":42,"context_line":"                  \u003c/note\u003e"},{"line_number":43,"context_line":"                  \u003c/step\u003e"},{"line_number":44,"context_line":"            \u003c/substeps\u003e"}],"source_content_type":"application/xml","patch_set":10,"id":"da20952f_3345f516","line":41,"in_reply_to":"da20952f_d09a9061","updated":"2015-09-01 21:54:05.000000000","message":"Done","commit_id":"15426155e2ff42db41f72d774db2c75b250b9f6a"}]}