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{"doc/networking-guide/source/adv-config-address-scopes.rst":[{"author":{"_account_id":9162,"name":"Lana Brindley","email":"openstack@lanabrindley.com","username":"loquacity"},"change_message_id":"edd73c0001cfbdb40461740be54570e5f5f877b4","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":139,"context_line":"      | shared            | True                                 |"},{"line_number":140,"context_line":"      +-------------------+--------------------------------------+"},{"line_number":141,"context_line":""},{"line_number":142,"context_line":"#. Make sure that subnets on an external network are created"},{"line_number":143,"context_line":"   from the subnet pools created above:"},{"line_number":144,"context_line":""},{"line_number":145,"context_line":"   .. code-block:: console"}],"source_content_type":"text/x-rst","patch_set":1,"id":"dada55a8_b88a6ebd","line":142,"updated":"2016-07-20 01:52:27.000000000","message":"This is super-grammer-picky, but if you\u0027re referring to a specific external network it should be \"Make sure that subnets on the external network...\" instead. I think I prefer the less-specific original, though, because it\u0027s easier for people to apply  it to any number of subnets on any number of external networks.","commit_id":"420c416ed0db04d7c741d4854114ce6871058b8b"},{"author":{"_account_id":841,"name":"Akihiro Motoki","email":"amotoki@gmail.com","username":"amotoki"},"change_message_id":"dccab2e1468034a29cf0907791b96d0ecc0268d6","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":139,"context_line":"      | shared            | True                                 |"},{"line_number":140,"context_line":"      +-------------------+--------------------------------------+"},{"line_number":141,"context_line":""},{"line_number":142,"context_line":"#. Make sure that subnets on an external network are created"},{"line_number":143,"context_line":"   from the subnet pools created above:"},{"line_number":144,"context_line":""},{"line_number":145,"context_line":"   .. code-block:: console"}],"source_content_type":"text/x-rst","patch_set":1,"id":"dada55a8_4104f148","line":142,"in_reply_to":"dada55a8_b88a6ebd","updated":"2016-07-20 17:41:28.000000000","message":"I am okay with any version. My intention of my series of backports is to sync the mitaka branch with the master as possible as we can. The original text in the master branch was \u0027an external networks\u0027 and it was changed to \u0027an external network\u0027 (as only single external network is used in this example). It might be better to use \u0027the subnets on ....\u0027 as this example assumes subnet on the external networks are created somewhere else. I am not an native speaker and I am not sure what is better, so I would like to wait for more appropriate writers.","commit_id":"420c416ed0db04d7c741d4854114ce6871058b8b"}]}