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{"security-guide/section_networking-services-security-best-practices.xml":[{"author":{"_account_id":12325,"name":"Nathaniel Dillon","email":"nathaniel.dillon@alumni.depaul.edu","username":"sicarie"},"change_message_id":"100a32bc2d477263254ce7ffa59fb2ea401a8b96","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":21,"context_line":"      \u003cfilename\u003epolicy.json\u003c/filename\u003e, within OpenStack Networking"},{"line_number":22,"context_line":"      provides a method to provide finer grained authorization of"},{"line_number":23,"context_line":"      users on tenant networking methods and objects. OpenStack Networking policy"},{"line_number":24,"context_line":"      definition affects network availability, network security and overall OpenStack"},{"line_number":25,"context_line":"      security.  Cloud architects and operators should carefully evaluate their policy"},{"line_number":26,"context_line":"      towards user and tenant access to administration of network resources. For a more detailed"},{"line_number":27,"context_line":"      explanation of OpenStack Networking policy definition, please"}],"source_content_type":"application/xml","patch_set":1,"id":"3acd31a7_4cba35e3","line":24,"updated":"2015-04-29 20:42:57.000000000","message":"I believe this needs a \"The\" before the start of the sentence and the pluralization of definition (as there are many entries in the policy.json file).","commit_id":"601fcf74a03dde32a81a9b02526e2215023e6fe8"},{"author":{"_account_id":16115,"name":"Laura Moore","email":"lauramoore1403@gmail.com","username":"lauramoore"},"change_message_id":"de51e9ca15950c7bdd4a891096b13347208901fb","unresolved":false,"context_lines":[{"line_number":21,"context_line":"      \u003cfilename\u003epolicy.json\u003c/filename\u003e, within OpenStack Networking"},{"line_number":22,"context_line":"      provides a method to provide finer grained authorization of"},{"line_number":23,"context_line":"      users on tenant networking methods and objects. OpenStack Networking policy"},{"line_number":24,"context_line":"      definition affects network availability, network security and overall OpenStack"},{"line_number":25,"context_line":"      security.  Cloud architects and operators should carefully evaluate their policy"},{"line_number":26,"context_line":"      towards user and tenant access to administration of network resources. For a more detailed"},{"line_number":27,"context_line":"      explanation of OpenStack Networking policy definition, please"}],"source_content_type":"application/xml","patch_set":1,"id":"3acd31a7_5be89b7c","line":24,"in_reply_to":"3acd31a7_4cba35e3","updated":"2015-04-30 08:39:02.000000000","message":"I wrote \u0027policy definition\u0027 referring to evaluation of policy or strategy impact on availability and security. This was my understanding of what the original sentence was trying to convey. I think your proposed edits change the meaning of the sentence towards the concrete definitions specified in policy.json, which might improve overall flow in the section.  I made your recommended changes. Thanks.\n\nDone","commit_id":"601fcf74a03dde32a81a9b02526e2215023e6fe8"}]}
